Sunday, August 3, 2008

queen and sevent life

chapter 1
meeting the queen and the servant





once upon a time I was a normal but useless little girl .I once again had to go and go and get two buckets full of fresh well water I had no time. The queen was already complaining as she was every morning. She was not a very pleasant queen. I heard about that before I worked for her and thought it was just an untrue rumor and started working for her and thought those rumors were really true and i could not believe that i actually did not believe such thing. But when it came to giving gold away and talking to her people she was at her best and very loved by her people



chapter 2
disaster to the queen

The next day the queen had a meeting with her people.She was nerves and so nervous she forgot about being nice to her people even though she has had three thousand meetings before in her life. She was so busted by her people and the people had said mean things about the queen and throne stick at her she was just such a mess and she was covered in a bunch of hay and tomatoes her dress was covered in mud and poop she could not bear the horrible accident that happened at that meeting. I was actually pretty happy that the people found out how the queen really treated other people and that she got a peace of what other people got from her and I guess she didn't





chapter 3
another one to serve, whoooooo!






okay so I so its the first time I've been happy in a long time.The next day a horrible thing was sent from the doctors that did not care about what people said about them so what happened thee other day they didn't really care about it at all. well she went over to the doctors because her stomach was aching really bad early that morning and they sent a letter saying that she was pregnant. When her servants read her that she pregnant she blurted out pregnant I don't believe you at all let me see that letter and she snatched it away from one of the servants. She was so happy she fainted. They let her sit there for a while and then started to get worried so they asked the doctor to come he came as fast as you can say rap up this party and as quick as wink he was standing next to her bed he said that he came as quick as he could go to get there because women that faint while they are pregnant there baby can get very sick and can have to get taken out very very early.Then there was a silence in the room...............




chapter 4
coming soon

2 comments:

Olivia said...

you are a very talented writer.. i can't wait for chapter three.

Anonymous said...

Piper, I love your story, I used to write stories too, but none of them were as interesting as yours. Can't wait for chapter 3.
By the way, I had fun with you and your siblings last night....see you Sunday!