Tuesday, March 31, 2009
Anybody's World
Introduction Hi,my my name is Rebbecca.I'm the most unusual person any one has ever met.I know that sounds very weird but it's not to me cause I'm me.I think I'm probably a little crazy because I made my own world.It's called anybody's world.I don't think it's that pretty or cool but if you like it that's okay.But let me start the story! 1 Chapter How Just How? I lived in a very small and dirty house.It was very stinky .One day I went to look around .I was in a place where it was cold , dark ,and garbage piled every where. But I liked it ,it was a perfect place for me because I could do something with it.Heres the question what do I do with it? Oh now I know I'll make things .For my family's graveyard ,oh yes I have forgotten to bring up something.I don't have a family.At least a talking puppet named Sara.I'm also very poor.I'm fine with it, it's just one little problem.I don't have supportive parents either.My parents only died on the 5 of January and today is the 23 of January.Maybe I could make a thing called a bell. Yeah!In these days it was 1010 ,this was years and years ago.Everybody on the earth right now was so not born then.So they didn't have bells back then.They didn't invent bells back way then and I was the first child to ever invent something.I wanted to make something called the bell because my moms name was Beckie ,and my dads name is Llewellyn with to ll 's and I wanted two letters from my parents name of something I'm going to invent.And that will remind me of my parents.So I started to invent but always thought just how am going to make it. In these days people really had three kinds of instruments .I wanted to make something new.So I did first I got piece of metal. I got a bowl shaped thing and I curved the edges outward.Then I got a thin piece of metal.I found a metal ball.I put the thin piece of metal through the middle of the bowl, and the other one on the bottom of the bowl.I took the metal ball and put it on the end of the thin metal. It looked very awkward.I went out in the streets and tried to let it sit there.Then I tried to wiggle it upside down.Then I tried the write way and it made the most beautiful noise in the world.People from all directions looked at me people stared out there windows.I ran home and went to bed.Next morning I got on my best clothes and ran back to the junkyard.I grabbed a jar that said 25cents perfect I thought.I ran next to the bench and yelled out to hear a bell for 25cents come over hear!man when I got home I had 10,750cents.In a month I had invented 20 things and made 200$.Lots of money to me.Then it was my fake birthday!(I don't know my real birthday).I was turning 9 years old!For my fake birthday I went to go shopping. I redid my house to make it more stylish. I started going to school and on the first day I got ten friends! One of my dreams came true just because of a piece of junk.I was proud of myself until I .....................retired. 2 Chapter Rich Kid I became one of the most famous people in the world.I also became one of the most richest people any one has ever seen.I kept making things and never stopped.I couldn't help it...it...it it was something I needed to do to survive.I thought I'd die if I didn't have money. But that wasn't true.I decided that I had enough money to last a life time.So I tried to be a normal kid.I quit trying to get money. I really wanted to be a normal kid it was just so hard.I didn't have enough room for any of my stuff any more and the money didn't have a room. So there was a good reason to quit.I had a hard time about thinking something to tell everybody that I'm quitting.So I decided that I would throw a big sale and then after a year or so I would go back to business.Being rich and quitting is a problem caused after you quit .Also people who are rich you know are really famous are asked by a bunch of people why did you quit.I used to tell them I didn't it's still in my heart ,and they never believed me.So I said''just back of''.As the year ended less people wanted me back.I grew lonely,tired,and bored so I knew getting back into being one of those special people would make me happy again.And hopefully people around the world love me all over again.I didn't do it for the money I did it for the happiness!
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2 comments:
Piper, you did really well for this short story. You gave great details on Rebbecca's life. I love reading about quirky weird people, it's all so interesting and I'm kind of quirky myself :D
I laughed at the part when she told people to "back off!" because they kept asking her why she had quit inventing, haha!
Keep writing short stories, I think you're a wonderful writer. Maybe someday you'll include some pictures to help illustrate your story so I can read it to my little ones, they love books! And I know you are a fabulous artist just like your mom!
HI piper! You are so talented! I want to hear more of this story if there is more.
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